Poetry / chernobyl (Analysis)
You were a nuclear reaction in my belly,
bombarded with protons some night of
strangest bliss.
Unstable elements knew no other way to react.
You sapped me of energy
to make your own.
I did not create you.
Well, I sure did not mean to-
But in such an unclean reactor
as my womb
you could only erupt forth,
spewing blood and fallout
into the world you could not know.
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It sounds like unplanned pregnancy, I don’t like the words used to describe it. There is no warm tones that imply love or welcoming of a newborn. Very cold and irresponsible use of words.
The combination of words does work from a teacher’s point of view, no mispells, paragraphs not proportioned 4, 4, 5.
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