Stage Play / Come Back

I never knew how much i needed you until you weren't there.

Life without you is truly just not fair

 

Your smile makes me feel like a bird just learning to fly

Please just smile, or at least try

 

You have not been your self at all

I don't want to see you fall

 

Losing someone is never easy

The man downstairs can be so sleezy

 

I know that I don't even understand

But perk up, dont be so bland

 

I miss your warming hugs

I miss your playful tugs

 

Hold me in a hug once more

Hold my hand by the seashore

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Age: 13
Loc: United States
Gen: F
Last Login: July 01
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