Poetry / Are We There Yet?

The pick-up slithers down the street.

There's a dead old woman on the passenger side

kissing her run-down husband's feet.

 

It's gonna be a long ride.

 

A young man waits in the backseat

to take his father's place at the wheel

while a dead old woman stays by the feet

 

of a man that is not real...

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