Lyrics / Closer To Summer

Next week is the last

Week of school.

Soon my friends

Will be leaving.

I may never

See them again-

Ever.

Cause now all we're doing

Is getting

Closer to summer!

With the pools opening,

And sprinklers going-

Now.

Getting hotter and hotter everyday

Cause we're getting

Closer to summer

Every moment.

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July 10, 2009

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May 30, 2009

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Good overall, but I think you should work on separation. Like instead of “Next week is the last/Week of school” make it “Next week is/ the last week of school”. Otherwise pretty good.

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