I was just expressing a thought that passed… nothing really special about it.. I don’t really put my “good” work on here. Thanks anyways! = )
Humor/Satire / Flyer Miles
Everybody has bad days… I just have them more frequently then most people. I call them my frequent flyer miles.
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I have a friend who was a flight attendant and she gives you a thumbs up! She wants to put your quote on a shirt!
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I get what youre saying, but it didn’t make me laugh or anything. I don’t get the flyer part. Like, if you worked in the kitchen at a food joint, and said ‘frequent frier miles’ but there’s no connection here like that. How do you know you have more than most people? Maybe if you put something in there that told us that. Like if youre a stewardess that crosses the date line a lot so you have more days, you know what I mean? and I think ‘then’ is suppse to be ‘than.’ Like i spent five years in jail and the kids called it government sponsored privage school. I might just be stupid, but I don’t get the twist in this one.
I wouldn’t really put it in humor satire. It sounds more like the quotes or something that you would put on a t-shirt. and just woundering if frequent flyer miles relate to anger issues
I think the “miles” is superfluous.Mention frequent flyer and everybody will immediately ‘get you’.Infact i think you could just add an ’s’ on the end of flyer: “i call them frequent flyers”.Not only is joke delivery speeded up,it sort of gets your reader/audience into your ‘club’ of knowledge and gives a greater feeling of inside knowlegde being shared.
Of course that also reinforces the whole programme of FF’s as bad.Which to most people i would hazard a guess rings true.Another essential ingredient of humour.
Pretty good.Now i know someone else that thinks the whole frequent flyer hook is a rip off.I’ll add you to the list.Except not on Monday to Fridays.Or Saturdays.Actually not on Sundays either well,except for 02.:30 am to 02:32 am.
Excellent perception of life. However, the frequent flyer miles doesn’t really work there. Unless, you talk about how you ‘fly off the handle’ at things. Something like that?
Hope this helps.
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