Lyrics / don't go away

I know what I said was mean,
And I’m sorry,
I’ll take it back
I won’t talk smack

Corus:
I just want you back, don’t go,
Go away,
Cause I want you to stay
Because it hurts me
For you to leave,
I’ll change
I’ll do it over,
I can’t take it again,
Everyone seems to be leaving,
But you’re my true love
I’m not done,
Don’t go

I’ve had too many, leave
All because me,
I don’t know myself anymore,
I don’t even get it,
I don’t even get why I said it,

Corus:

I want you,
But I know you won’t want me
And I just want you to see,
I’ll change,
I’ll be different,
For you,
Ill miss you
I’ll want to kiss you

Corus:

 

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cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

June 05, 2009

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REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats
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hi there,

i like it…the v/c/v/c pattern and the all so popular theme of love…you say you’ll change…it would be good to say in what way, why…and you said you didn’t know why you said….something you don’t mention either..sometimes it’s good to let the listener figure it out but in some cases..like this you have to clarify what you are going through and why…ok, i yapped enough..in general, you have a good foundation, for a good love song alot of people can relate too…good luck..jim

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