Poetry / Midnight Bombing (Analysis)

I like the internal ryhme you have going on and that I had to read this poem a couple times to understand which is amazing by the way. I love how your message is inbetween the lines and hidden if one reads it plainly. please tell me when you’ve written another poem or story it’s great work!

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August 31, 2009

by theboss420

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thanks bra
ahha

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It feels like this is talking about street graffiti and the compulsion of youth to use whatever media they can to propagate the truth they perceive.  But they are not spreading truth as some altruistic gift to humanity.  They are thrill seekers, the poem seems to say.

So then, is it truth for truth’s sake or street art for thrill’s sake?

“an abandoned train

littered with a generations movement cuased by the need for change”

I liked that image.  There’s the idea that the previous generations felt the need for change, but they gave up.  This seems to allude to the fact that the current generation knows that they will also go this route.  So, they must try as hard as they can now.  Later they will have lost the will to fight.

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August 31, 2009

by theboss420

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ya its about graffiti
but its a generation that does it for thrill and to show the truth behind what there doin
its not only for thrills its about getting your art out there in the public and to move it forwards towards idk um galleries and respect

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nobady expected me
is nobady supposed to be nobody here?
Thought it was a great expression

and still nuthin remains the same,
is the nuthin supposed to be used here as a slang or did u mean nothing?

The piece feels a little open ended to me. But over all it is really a good piece.

Very good, just a few spelling errors.
-caused
-nothing
-nobody