Romance / The first love.

Your haunting me, I see you everywhere even in my dreams. Very intimate dreams. You are my purpose, my everything. How can I stand here near you and not be moved by you. You hold my heart in your hands leaving me breathless longing for just one last breathe, just one last breathe here with you feeling your presents embracing me. I haven't any feeling in my feet moving up through my body leaving my paralyzes, your love paralyzing me. I'm now Catatonic to your will, the beholder of my last breathe, the beholder of my heart. I never thought that you love would haunt me even long after we were done and over. I love you, even your flaws and imperfections

 

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