Romance / serenity (Analysis)

By thy scent of gods perfection thou shall never feel the darkness within fires rage. Eternity seems forever, until thine flesh descends from the heavensand eternity will never be enough. We stand under moons light staring itno one anothers soul admiring our serenity and angels ivory. Lips as soft as water and winds howl grows i can feel thy heart beat but we are not close. I have not yet held thee in heavens glare, but my heart cries for it. n the night i hear thy whispers through the fogs grasp. I am heavens warrior, and autmn's beauty will forever stay pure. As we embrace, i feel the wind the in my lips and tghe cold in my heart. I open my eyes and i see my angel dissapear into the mist. With my hands still reaching for love, i grab a transparent stone in the shape of a heart, and it said, " Thee will forever feel my love through this stone. This is my heart. Live with it,die with it and when gods gift shrivels we shall be together again." From that day forward the rest of my life has had a void of love and addiction. I can feel her touch in the night and her lips in the dawn. Immortality disgusted me and death seemed so sweet. I dreamed of her, dreaming of her beauty and the day that i die.

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