Poetry / You
Disgraced
nails on broken glass
blood drops
Shudder.
Hidden lies turn into
absolute highs
So shamed every second
Escape
Eyes rolling,
loss of balance and just calm
restful places to sleep.
Dormant truths can’t hurt you now.
Let the shame go and be the you they like
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I like the choice of words..
But they don’t fit together quite right.
It’s not very clear to me. It’s making me
think of something very painful, something or some type of pain someone or something is in.
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Disgraced
Shudder
Escape
Thought provoking piece and a bit disturbing. This causes me to wonder what has driven “you” to such a place. There are so many interpretations to this that I think a reader would benefit from a bit more information to help them understand the issue. Why disgraced, etc.?
The only phrase I have a problem with is your next to last line. How can a “dormant ” truth ever hurt you? Is this an active truth that just now went dormant? If not, what then.
i don’t understand a word of this. is it about someone killing themself or getting HIGH?
clearer next time please:]
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