Poetry / Love Reject (Analysis)

It was the image of what your love could have been if you loved me back.
Day in and day out that image kept me coming back,
But not even drugs could make you love me in the worst way.
And just when I put my middle finger up, you would beg me to stay.
Gave you my all, knowing everything would fall.
But life without you wasn’t life at all.
Psychological setup, painting pretty pictures in my head.
Even though I knew in reality this relationship was dead.
So badly I wanted you to be the one,
Even when another woman had you sprung.
Playing myself like I didn’t know what was up,
So sad to say, that I was so in love.
Hate the fact I let you get the best of me,
Just because I wanted you so desperately.
A jigsaw puzzle and I lost every piece,
Should have known this war couldn’t be won by me.
Wasted too much time trying to make you love me.
When love was the last thing you saw in me.
No regrets though, I’ll never look back.
I’ll just let my radio keep playing that same ol’ track.
Cause I know that you’ll never get something this good back.

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