Poetry / run out of things to say

not sure why it happened

the day I set it down

certaintly not planned

or agenda to be found

as I pushed the chair in

and turned to walk away

never did it cross my mind

I'd run out of things to say

no more words of wisdom

or bullshit to convey

but if im not mistaken

seems i picked my pen back up today

(C)SMRB

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July 24, 2009

dragonshaker

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65	47.6% (21 votes)	73.0%

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24	M	Switzerland	October 16

dragonshaker reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Lots of same old sentences looking for rhymes but not really saying much here, what’s it all about? the reader would like more clarity it seems mumbled and much to do about nothing like the conversation of two old codgers in a retirement home.
Sorry i wasn’t at all impressed with this poem, just my opinion mike

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July 24, 2009

by SMRB

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65	70.0% (30 votes)	44.9%

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50	M	Atascadero, CA	November 14

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Hey Mikle whats happening, thanks for the whats up with this poem.Here is the deal, I used to write all the time and was liked by all those reading ,Then suddenly about 6 months ago I stopped ,then this morning i had the desire to pick up the pen and write and although not that great a piece according to you and i would agree, mostly it was good for me to get back at it
no matter how meager it may have seemed,THANKS, have a great day,

July 24, 2009

by dragonshaker

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65	47.6% (21 votes)	73.0%

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24	M	Switzerland	October 16

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Don’t worry about my comment here i had no idea you had been away so perhaps in a few weeks or months you will have improved back to your usual high standard of writing sorry if i sound patronising or acting as if i know you just my way,mike

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