Limericks / Obama Limerick (July 23, 2009)

Thailand has a town called Phuket.
All broadcasters were trying to duck it.
They were very aware
of this trap ON the air.
Most of them simply couldn't unlock it.

Plans to stop next Iranian rocket
were announced in the town of Phuket.
Mrs. Clinton went there
when Barack, OFF the air,
used the word for her special docket.

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RJHugs avatar General Stranger

October 28, 2009

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JustJeff avatar General Stranger

September 06, 2009

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Funny and makes sense. Great job!

Lysander avatar General Stranger

August 07, 2009

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Seems a little forced with the rhyming scheme (a whole helluva lot of -et rhymes, so that’s natural), but amusing nonetheless. Honestly reading your limericks and poems always makes a long day of reviewing chapters / short stories a little more entertaining, thanks for that. =)

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August 06, 2009

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Good flow!
Keep up the limericks!

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August 05, 2009

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Whimiscal parade.. of the factual current politics.  I’ve never read anything like it.  I must say, I rather enjoyed this.. and would certainly enjoy reading more of your work.

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August 05, 2009

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I thought this was quite humorous and good play on words. Good piece of political satire.  I didn’t think is sounded forced at all.  Keep up the good work.

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August 04, 2009

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Very enjoyable.

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August 04, 2009

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I thought the other one i read was better than this but i still liked the political-ness in poetry form. Well Done!

Mooney avatar General Stranger

August 04, 2009

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I have to admit, I’m a traditionalist when it comes to the rhythm of a limerick. There are a few lines with too many syllables making the limerick a bit clunky. A little “radical revision”is needed. Anyway, the humor is definitely spot on. Good beginning.

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August 03, 2009

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Very creative and interesting.

Doesn’t seem to have much to do with the title though, i must say.  If i just don’t understand i apologize.

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