Romance / Forever (Analysis)

I fell for him when I was young.

Time gave in and we were done.

Something went wrong, but i don't know why.

So now I sit in my room and cry.

He told me he loved me and held onto my heart.

I told him he ment so much to me from the start.

One day some girl came strolling his way.

Now I am forgotten while she's there to stay.

I wish he knew the pain I feel.

The sorrow that's buried inside my chest.

I thought we were ment to be together.

But now I know some things don't last forever.

 

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