Romance / Last moment

Here I am, Sitting, Crying.

Now it's not like I'm sobbing crying,

the kind of crying when a single tear falls every couple seconds.

           "So that's it?" I say, stammering over the words.

I'm taking in every single thing about him while I have the time to.

His Abercrombie sent surounds me as I'm examining his

Freshly cut brown hair.

Looking at his eyes, Oh his eys.

Right now they seem to be green meaning he's angery or very upset.

When I think about it they were almost never green the whole 14 months we were together,only when we fought. Most of the time they were they were light blue, a sign showing he was very happy or pleased. Other times, like when he was in an awkward position, like when he met my parents, his eyes are amazing. One is blue and one is green.As thinking all this he snaps me back to reality by saying;

                "I guess so, I need change and the only way to get it is to let you go"

He gives me the final kiss on the forehead and walks away drowning me in the sent of my first love.

 

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