Poetry / Fast Car

fast car, top down, moving in ellipticals.
bright stars, cool wind, flying down this open road.
the lane dividers, quickly changing into lengthy blurs.
your breathing quickens. secretly, i'm reassured.
suddenly, i feel you looking at me.
i know i'm not what you've been looking for.
but if only this dream could last forever,
you and me and this moment bound here together.

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August 22, 2009

amiller

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amiller reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

very sweet, I like tthe sentance I feel you looking at me. I know I am not what you’ve been looking for very touching

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