Poetry / Owls (Analysis)

Adolescence flipped baseball cards

and ate the five year old bubble gum

like the dirt of solstice

sleeping no sunflower dearer

 

and the newspaper dared

allocating only one truth

the weather

in its invariable nature

 

all hail Marduk

the relationship of lapidate sediment

plucky lovable igneous hell

and the pickled carbon

 

enlightening to illegal immigrants

the hydrogen like America

unwilling to work

some war

 

from the Midwestern farms

a stagnant methane waste

amidst the muggy beet

a skirt stake knot

 

so much the child

of chaw spit

flowed the bottle

rocket crawling from a diseased cat’s ass

 

the sign reading Pop. 55

but in truth 54

as Mesopotamia always steals Daniel from the census

for an epicurean throne

 

the sister crying

and coming simultaneously

like pop rocks and dry ice

flooding the blue suede leather couch

 

the alopecia

and girlie looks

radiating breathless

like a neon Pabst beer ribbon

 

a towhead labor crowning

and a fizzy demise

a departing brain(jail) cell

and languorous plenty of dilapidated fornication

 

a future boyfriend’s fist

reminding her of her favorite

strawberry shortcake

cartoon sex position

 

the dawdler drawl

shinning a lunar bumpkin era

like the seasons

subtle

 

sell death and droll

for the countryside

to speak of cement

not settling

 

the Irish church bell

ringing nescient

irony

upon the common maggot or might

 

all agrarian minded

folklore

protestant damned upon holiday

like a hateful Tao

 

forgiveness

is married

to impossible and human

in a thesaurus

 

 

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September 03, 2009

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this is really interesting to me and well written
the only question i have for you is what is the deep meaning
it  sarts out simple then quickly becomes more and more complicated with stronger word use. is there a theme?

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