Lyrics / rap

Im done with this

behind these eyes is something no one will miss

im too fucking depressed to lead a normal life

im too fucked in the head to stay away from the knife

the knife of pain sticking in my heart from which il never be freed

its not me, a normal life ill never lead.

you dont know me, you can never know what i see

but that wont stop you from startin controversy

everyone sins, we all fuckin judge people we dont know

we all act fake, we all put on a show.

i do it too im not just spittin shit

but at least im one of the few that will admit,

that as of now im nothing, no one to anyone

but i guarentee when its all said and done

ill be somebody youll tell people you once knew

and you can tell them about the relationship with me you blew.

but for now ill just sit here alone leaving this mind to free

thinking, praying to be the person i know i can be.

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October 02, 2009

Tattered_and_Torn

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Tattered_and_Torn reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I love this. I mean honestly, I can relate to every single line in this. I’m about 2 years younger than you and might not have experienced everything you have or if I did, definetly not the same way, but I can relate and that is a very good thing in a rap or in anything written really.

I loved how when i was reading it that I could picture it being rapped in front of me; the diction, the articulation. I loved how I could feel it, not just see it.

These were my favorite lines of the entire thing,

“that as of now im nothing, no one to anyone

but i guarentee when its all said and done

ill be somebody youll tell people you once knew”

This is so much like what I am experiencing now as a freshman in high school with many issues in her life and just by reading this…i don’t know…it just made me feel like I wasn’t alone…you know? like there was someone out there that knew what it felt like to be in the same situation, but could still get through it somehow.

I may be a little fish in a huge pond, but one day that will change.

Thank you so much!