Poetry / Different Halls (Analysis)

No matter what I’d say
      Or what I’d do
I just couldn’t
      Get through to you
You’d say you understand
      How I feel
But you don’t even understand
      This is real
I begged to move
      Away from that school
Where the teachers ignored
      Words and actions cruel
Just because with a smile
      It was disguised
The malice hidden
      Except in the eyes
Always the eyes
      And sometimes the tone
Of a voice that later
      Would chill to the bone
But you never listened
      You’d just assume
I was going to Mom
      And leaving you
I kept trying because
      Your support I craved
But you always hung back
      Then you’d walk away
Now we focus on
      To whom blame falls
But I only wanted
      Different halls
Different classrooms
      Other classmates
To just be normal
      And not feel hate
Simple requests
      Or so it seems
But all I got
      Was different dreams
And you shake your head
      Cause it’s such a shame
Still hanging back and
      Denying all blame
 

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