Poetry / wish…per

 

 

 

 

i want to care for you, in such a way, it is hard for you to draw it inside your mind

to cradle you gently in my arms, for one can never be too kind

i want to put my lips close to yours, just close enough to inhale a bit of your spirit

to draw your breath deep into my lungs, to feel you pulse throughout every vein, to hear it

to put my ear tight to yours, to allow my desires paint, to reach in and colour your beautiful mind

heaven soft vapours dripping, pasteling your every sense, until you are mine

to use my firm hands, never once to abuse you, for it is not my way

instead to softly caress you, to slide them along every inch, every supple curve, to play

to unbind your every tingle and bring them each by the millions, to every inch of your warming surface

to watch you squirm with newfound passion, to peer deep into your breathtaking eyes, seeing purpose

to use my tender tongue to drag every drip of glow from your virginic sweet caramelized skin

to watch with such incredible pleasure as your body dances, so freely within

to absorb your every single ounce of essence, overflowing from your already saturated mind

to see your body change from being so weak to so very taught, without ever even being inside

to feel the continuous quiver coming from your closed eyelids, your soul craving more

to press my firm chest to yours, to watch your eyes slowly open, knowing just what is in store

to become one with you, to have to feel my eyes say to yours, i would never do you harm

eternally by your tender side i would remain, arm in smoldering arm…

 

 

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