Screenplay / Once Upon part 3 w/ recap
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Ahh and so I finally get to see the meeting between these three characters and having read later parts already I can see a little foreshadowing in their character developments to come later.
Again you have a knack for ending at the right time and also a knack for painting a picture that seems common enough and not too extraordinary. The thing I’d like to note on here is your use of newspaper clippings and headlines, I like the concept. You dialouge flows nicely and it’s an easily read screenplay.
However I must note that having read those other parts first I cannot comment objectively on these previous parts because I see what’s going to happen developing, instead of trying to develop what’s going to happen.
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