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Yes now I can see where you are going with this script, it’s very *0’s orianteted I think, I guess you have worked in this enviroment, as you display very detailed knowledge of this area of industry.
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What i read i liked but it would of made more sence to me if i read the parts before this one. You have talent in Screenplay keep up the good work.
Quite an interesting turn of events. I guess the Balaclava wearing men are ‘PCSO’s of a sort. But if not, who are they?
I can see this playing well in the U.K. and perhaps with the right audience, in the U.S. So far, the scenes depict gruesome violence that may be an acquired taste to some. (C’mon… Fecal matter and rats eating body parts? When has that ever happened following a sneeze?) I was thinking this was a suspense drama, but now I might have to call it a horror comedy. Not necessarily bad, of course.
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