Short Story / Middle School in One Day
Middle School in One Moment
Greg suddenly looked up as this humble beauty entered the room.
Oh my God I need to bang that chick
All day he couldn't stop thinking of her light blonde hair, and her mysterious hazel eyes. The way she stumbled into a conversation with a gorgeous smile made his heart melt.
As she approached, Greg started to wonder if she was walking towards him.
Holy shit. She's coming to me.
"Hey Greg! I missed you over the summer, what's up?" She said in her cute petite voice.
Lizzie?!
"Hey Lizzie. Nothing really, you? Oh, and you look different, but I can't put my finger on how.."Greg said nervously.
"Haha. Nothing really. I had a fun summer with Becky and Caitlin, did you have a good summer?"She asked, giggling.
"My nose job definately paid off! Wow he got cuter. his face is so long now!" Lizzie thought.
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Interesting concept, I enjoyed the extremely superficial aspects of the two characters. The only thing is, and maybe things have changed since I was in middle school, it’s hard to believe that a middle schooler would think something like “I need to bang that chick.” Middle schoolers are just beginning to kiss the opposite sex, I doubt they’re thinking that explicitly about sex. Maybe high school in one day would be more fitting.
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lol, I glad we kind of got in her head….It just shows how some people just lie just because. There’s not much to say about his. grammar wise it was good and overall a fun read.
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