Lyrics / Something about You (Analysis)

There's something about the way you smile
Makes me feel like I could run ten miles
There's something about the way you look at me
That makes me feel it's all I need to be

There's something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look like stars
There's something about the way you do everything
It's something that makes me want to sing

There's something about the way you walk
You're beautiful at you I gawk
There's something about the way you sing
That makes me feel I could do anything

There's something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look like stars
Something about the way you do everything
It's something that makes me want to sing

There's something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look stars

Something about the way you talk right to me
Walk by me
Smile at me
Look at me...

There's something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look like stars
Something about the way you do everything
It's something that makes me want to sing

There's something about the way you smile
Makes me feel like I could run ten miles
But without you there is no sun
There is no moon
I cannot run

There's something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look stars
Something about the way you do everything
It's something that makes me want to sing

I could sing this song until I die
But then with you I'd have no chance
So I'll go out into the world
And hope with you I could sing and dance

There's something about you
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ray2x avatar General Stranger

November 16, 2009

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Give me more melodic rhymes e.g. smile.,miles…run…sun. just give out more rhymes

King_Poet avatar General Stranger

November 10, 2009

King_Poet

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I don’t know who you are. But I believe in this. So far in MY life I haven’t heard a
single word better than this.
There is no color, there is no race, there is no disabled, there are no sick, there are
no assholes or fuck ups or rednecks. But there are.
If there was a weapon that destroyed fear I think we’d all see life a little different.
I hope you understand that I wish to make this a “favorite” as they say, of MINE,
because It’s fucking perfect.

InspiredWriter avatar General Stranger

November 06, 2009

InspiredWriter

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My faovrite part is

There’s something about you
The way you are
To me your eyes
They look like stars

=] That’s gunna stick by me forever! Very catchy. And it sounds like someone has a very cute crush on someoneeee =]

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Loc: Greenville, WI
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