Lyrics / Shadows Kill

Clearing out the cobwebs of a weary heart
Raped and left for dead
Turning through the pages of a thoughtless mind
Everyone has read
I hear that our salvation is an open road
With its own dead end
And now that I am wanting
There’s nothing for me here

So I’ll run through the darkness
Searching for my way back home
Because every now and then shadows kill
When they are left alone in the sun

I’ve searched in different places just to find
That people are the same
They all say that suicide’s the best remedy
But it only numbs the pain
So now we’re held up in the driest season
Crying out for rain
But collected or divided
We’d all just wash away

So we’ll run through the darkness
Searching for our way back home
Because every now and then shadows kill
When they are left alone in the sun

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Sonic_Zealot avatar General Stranger

March 19, 2006

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Pretty nice flow to it. Only part that i would change is where you said that suicide numbs the pain. Cause it doesn’t…it spreads it around, fun for the whole family. But, to each his own, so i still gave you a good score.

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