Short Story / sing
Her mouth opens wide, her eyes shut tight. Commanding silence. She begins to sing, her voice fills the theatre with power and beauty. Rows of audience, taken aback. Eyebrows raised, eyes opened wide. Amazement and despair thrown together in one heap, battling with each other as her voice sweeps up and down the aisles
Voice fluxuating into a wild note, piercing the theatre and divulging it’s intermost caverns. Nothing is free from the power of her voice, the power of her.
And with a wild upturn of note, she stops. Silence echoes from one paralyzed watcher to the next. Their eyebrows lower, their eyes move away from her. Silence remains. She stands transfixed, staring out at the audience with the same intensity they had showered upon her moments ago.
Someone coughs.
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Ha, perfect. i’m sorry i really have nothing to say; this is too perfect.
(PS “divulging it’s intermost caverns.” should be divulging its intermost caverns.”)
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I think this piece has an interesting take, it seems like a very good writing exersize. It could be seen as a bit… purple. Could you make it a poem?
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What can I say but good job. I hope to read more of your work. Please stop by my site and tell me what you think, bye.
cool story .. i like it.. leaves ya hanging.. and u use great description.
This is poorly written, but don’t let this discourage you. Instead of writing this like it was from a zombie, try to write this as if your were telling this story to someone by mouth. Or, maybe you made this so poorly written it’s great, but who knows.
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