Lyrics / It's the...

Its the candle nearly finished and burnt down to about an inch/
Its the window sill I stare out/
Its the fabric/
Its the stitch/
Its the flame that dances/
and the passing of the masses/
Its my street lights and the pavement/
the graffiti art and enslavement/
Its the sudden breeze/
Its the mud beneath my feet/
Its the reality shows showing foriegn realities on TV/

Its my ambition/
My dreams/
My desires/
My screams/
My distance/
My withdrawl/
Its my all-consuming fall/

Its my failures/
My victory/
Its a 12 step two step to get me closer to me/

Its real/
Its my life/
All I’ve ever wanted/
lies within the reach of my mind/

Its the heartbreak/
Its the sorrow/
Its the memory of yesterday that can save a lost tomorrow/

Its a leaf/
Its a rock/
Its a life turned over/
Its a clean fresh start/

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January 01, 2008

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

very creative with alot of visuals that are all around the title of your lyric, ilike the line, the memory of yesterday can save a lost tomorrow..you mention a 12 step and starting over which alot of people can relate too..nice job..and keep writing

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