Lyrics / Instant Classic

Tryin to re write a classic/ a hopeless has been/on a mission of passion/far exceeding my ambition/out lastin/my energy is cashed in/my pockets empty baskets/

I sift/through the rubble and the garbage/to find my two sense/thrown out with the dinner scraps/A blitz attack and my mind is wiped clean/every memory I cherished suddenly means nothing/

As do I/a speck of dust/wind tossed through the sky/to live is to die/as to love is to lie/hand in hand/glaring into each other’s eyes/No tears to cry/No sense to make/all these words spill without the form to take/shifting constantly with no original shape/

If my penmanship is any indication of who I am/perhaps my listeners will better understand/for I am damned/to a place I could never get comfortable in/this prison of skin/every beat of my heart resonates sin/

I am plagued by them/my own symphony of demons/every day of my life is nothing more than a broken sequence/all the riches of the world couldn’t heal this heart MOST TRAGIC/

Pretend theres more to the story than this/A thousand lives lead to a thousand deaths/and all experience goes down with the ship/

Where am I in all of this/is there anywhere a poet’s soul truly fits/ A watcher/an onlooker/up in the stands/never the attraction/just always the fan/

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January 02, 2008

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,
where am i in all of this ,the only thing i might add to this is the title, it’s not mentioned throughout the song..people have to know what they like, nice job …

ok, i like it..a little to deep for me, but i guess your just more creative then me,i also luv the lines, a symphoney of demons,this prision of skin, and