Poetry / Revel Grey

Revel Grey was my new day,
a continuity of change.
All derangements rearranged,
now we’ve come up with a name.
The name seeps in and leaves a stain.

With it comes a half formed face,
turned still, cold, blue in my disgrace.
Praise Grey and Revel blue,
as a dance performed for losing you.

Raising and praising my grey mood,
until I’ve had a taste,
enough to make me chase,
for a new Grey,
but all I find are different shades.

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August 24, 2007

brahmasong

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August 24, 2007

anaphylaxis

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