Poetry / Yankee Impressions
Like all things
Texas is good and Bad
Of course at this point
My knowledge of Texas is limited
to San Antonio
This city is odd to me
It is a city that thinks it’s a small town
This is both
charming
and disturbing
sometimes this city is like
riding into the sunset
in a convertible Caddie
the top is down
and I just smoked a fatty
yet
sometimes this city is like
a scorpion in my ass
one thing for sure
Texans love neon
the whole city appears as a neon desert
with bright glowing franchises
popping up like cactus
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A gritty and cowboylike description of a place I have read much about and know that the current Scorpion in the world´s ass (great line that) grew up there (I think, correct me if I´m wrong)
The overall image is as brutal as it sounds, a neon hell hole.
The pace is good throughout too.
Good work
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bright glowing franchises
nice
The last line…maybe ‘cacti’ instead?
I don’t want to call this an intro, but I can easily see a fake travelogue piece following it.
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