Poetry / 6:00am

6:00am

Does it matter that I have tried? My heart have I not denied?

When is it too far? Where is the point of no return?

Show me and I run from it, sprinting for my life in the opposite direction.

Hold me down and whisper into my ear, chase away my longing for all that causes pain.

I lay on the broken glass trying hard to see my shattered reflection.

As I lay holding myself up on nothing, my blood mixes with the rain.

The mouth inside me screams a warning; it pleads me to run away.

I can’t give in to this, even when it feels so right.

It couldn’t possibly work out, not today.

So I will flee off into the night.

Lend me speed sweet temptress.

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