Quotes / The truth about love

ha, true. but plain. i like the idea, a very romantic one. but also a very cliche’d one. i’ve heard this before. it seems to be the underlying theme in a lot of things. the idea is a great one, but try and find a new way of saying or expressing it.

It was good.  It did feel a little on the short side.  But it was still good.

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July 15, 2006

by Mejasha

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It is a Quote!

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I can see this sung by some hippies.  Certainly I see truth in it.  But if you wrote it into a story, it might be taken more stereotypically (as in, hippies) than seriously.

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July 15, 2006

by Mejasha

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I can’t help it. I am a hippie at heart. Without the drugs of course.
I DO love everybody. I am just cheesy like that.

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A simple truth and beautifully worded.

The first two lines read very smoothly.  The third line may read better with “all others” instead of in everyone.  The last line begining with “and” sounds flat and does not read well with the rest.  Try revising it.  

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July 14, 2006

by Mejasha

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I think that you should take note that this is a ‘quote’ not poetry.
I am kindof dissapointed in the ‘3’.
Where is the love? Just kidding. You were just telling the truth. Still, a three? Then again, 3 is my favorite number!
Love All, Mejasha

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