Poetry / DIE ELVIS
Take back your Elvis
No Viva Las Vegas
Wrap him up in that ratty old leather jacket
Take him back
No not to Graceland
Back to your mother
‘Elvis IS DEAD, MY BOY’
Amazing Grace
Stop this insanity
Stop this torture of The King
Hail hail Rock n’ Roll
Elvis is DEAD
He’s worm-food
Let it go, man
Let it go!
No more Elvis music
No more of it
No more ‘50s hairstyle
No more of it
No more of that time-warp stuff
No more classics
Elvis didn’t commit suicide
I built a time machine
I killed that fat son-of-a
I killed Elvis!
‘Elvis is DEAD my son’
I killed Elvis
Don’t be cruel
To a heart that’s true
Don’t be cruel my ass
I saved the world from
Total Elvis-mania
Elvis (scream)
Total destruction of Elvis music
Die Elvis worshippers!!
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I hear really loud awful wrenching guitar like Jimi Hendrix forgot to take his foot off the petal and someone screaming on stage under red and yellow lights.
For that you are effective.
The poem itself is not my genre so I can’t criticize it in that sense.
Punk Rock is not dead.
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Out of all of your work, this one still ranks as one of my favorites. I mean, how much Elvis can folks stand? Ain’t it suffice to state merely, “The king is dead. He died on the throne.” After all, rock n roll isdashit. Great job, racing girl.
-So young so angry…Damn that rap music.
I kinda like the idea of poem, I think you could play a little with the flow.. and perhaps take out some of the no mores…
example of suggestion
Elvis is DEAD
Let it go, man
He’s worm-food
Let it go!
No more Elvis music
‘50s time warp hairstyle.
Again this is just a sugesstion and defintatly not ment to take anything away from you. I hope this helps
This piece made me laugh because I have often thought I’ve had enough of the Elvis
mania already!Thank you for writing this.
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