Poetry / I can always make myself laugh !

I am dreamer ,
and I can always make myself laugh !
Especially when I’m stoned
like now ,
I’m in the zone
the tone
it resonates
the way the light plays
in your eyes
can I stay a while
as we walk a ways
down this road
together
learning in play
just the way
you smile .

Your smile
it
lights up the world for me
And I can breathe appropriately
now .

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July 29, 2006

Oakam_Claus

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Oakam_Claus reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

The exclamation point floated away from “laugh”

I liked this because it reminded me of when I used to get stoned…just wanting that intellectual feeling off of it.

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