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An intergalactic traveler ,
One of the unravellers of
Time
using mine to unleash
The creative powers within all
that
seem to seek,
to unleash and express their power
In a way that’s not meek .
A Freak ?
An easy way to label me
Though I cannot deny that
without this outlet
I would not today be
set free.
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Ever hear of William Bohlman? I think everyone ought to learn the extensive power they truly possess. Traveling the multi-verse definitely aids in this. Cool write. The only suggestions I have are about the structure and line breaks. The way you have this set up makes some of the rhymes seem forced like “Freak” Also, the rhyme scheme isn’t consistent. I’d suggest doing something something about that, because as is this reads pretty choppy.
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