Poetry / i don't understand

I know they’re coming
I am just feeling so confused
because you’re a person that’s entered my life
saw from the start that you cut like a knife
you’ve embedded yourself deep into my soul
you are what I need to fill in this hole
within you burns strong illuminating light
guiding my passion, through the dark of the night
why did you want him?
he left without a trace
ignoring the sadness caught up in your face
my reasons for this are undefined
I couldn’t ready myself
my love is so blind
now you lead the way to my despised depression
just forget me
I’m hated
I see through you discretion

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July 28, 2006

Bernadine215

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156	18.8% (16 votes)	64.9%

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43	F	Harrisonville, NJ	September 25

Bernadine215 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Good job , hope to read more of your work. Please continue to write more poetry.

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July 28, 2006

thyme_agot

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28	F	United States	July 17

thyme_agot reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Kind of hard to follow. the begining sounds like part of a love poem then it changes.

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