Poetry / Drinking with the angels

Eat me
Watch me climb
Beyond the steps
Of your imagination
I am crawling
Towards the skies
That you put
Out of reach
And I am laughing
As I drink with the
Angels, who believe
In me, not in you
And can see
Why I’m here and
What I’ve done
Without you now
That you are gone
Banished from my
Train of thought
…………………………
And I smile

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October 31, 2006

cheryllleee

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cheryllleee reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Two things:

I really like it up until the “Banishjed from my train of thought line”

which doesn’t work because the poem is about this other person and they are clearly in your thoughts

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