Poetry / Library Fogotten
Dusty pages wait inside tattered books,
Hidden upon broken shelves,
Unread and untouched for ages.
Rain hammers upon the foggy windows
As wind shudders the ever-creaking doors,
Unopened and untouched for ages.
And the unsupported floors,
Upon which the library is forgotten,
Remains untouched for ages.
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It’s a good scence set up for something much bigger, I hope you plan to continue wirting with this in mind
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I read some of your other work, and I see that there’s a pattern to your style. You like repetition of certian lines-particularly the last ones. It’s great that you choose to mold your work this way. I liked this, as you described it “a scene,” it does provide great imagery.
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