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I wish i can grow long enough arms to give everyone in the world a hug

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jen09 avatar General Friend

January 04, 2007

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I really like this quote. It shows how amazingly compassionate you are. Most people today only see the world as horrific and getting worse. Thank you for seeing the good in all of this, and for wanting to make a change in the world, to comfort the people of the world.

God Bless You =]
I like it! Keep writing.

barb avatar General Stranger

January 04, 2007

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This is a really nice gesture! You must have a very kind heart!! (It should be could instead of can)  

Kels66 avatar General Stranger

December 29, 2006

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Yes that would be sweet except if the terrorists get mad. Then they will shoot at parts of your arms and well damn that would hurt. I get what you are saying but its a little impossible, like world peace.

the_engaged_few avatar General Stranger

December 19, 2006

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“I” should be capitalized.  I like this quote.

easywriter57 avatar General Stranger

December 07, 2006

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They would be dangerously long!
capitalize your “i” please.
Better if you wrote, “could” instead of can.

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November 06, 2006

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October 31, 2006

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I used this analogy before, but it fits here.  Critiquing this would be like a drunk kicking a puppy.  It’s so sweet that you just can not get too nit picky about it.  So, I won’t.  

But…please fix the grammar…

“I wish I COULD…” etc.

sleeplate20 avatar General Stranger

October 30, 2006

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I saw this one already. Make up something original please. Sweet sentiment, but then you’d really have a mess in your hands.

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October 25, 2006

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This is a sweet, feel-good quote – literally impractical, methaphorically idealistic, and very cute.

Either use “could” instead of “can” or “hope” instead of “wish”.

resonance avatar General Stranger

October 23, 2006

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god knows we all need it. beautiful

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