Lyrics / Congratulations

Ho boy. Try not to use the abbreviation “U” instead of “You”. It comes off as juvenile, and can only make you look worse.
Also, I’m thinking you meant to put “hey” not “Ehy”.
Other than that, very simplistic and declaractive song. It doesn’t really leave up any ideas or interesting images for the reader to take in and think about.
Consider breaking up the “hey congratulations” lines…they seem wordy and long, like they wouldn’t fit in with whatever the song’s melody would be.

I think this is like Ashley Simpson Avrel Lavein (sp) style attitude etc etc…
I’m not keen on the title but it does suit the song. It’s pretty cool, I think it could be a popular main stream song.

I liked it for the most part except for the end.
“U made me happy and then took back
And I don’t wanna like u anymore”

I think that you could have replaced this with something better because it seems just a little bit too  repeditive for me. I liked the iron though. Loved the line
“Ehy to u congratulations I didn’t think that with that face u could have been such a disgrace but
Congratulations…”
I laughed at this one. It was dark and seemed like a cheap shot. My kind of stuff.

I just really hate the way you typed. I really suggest that you complete your words.

this is very interesting and odd. i think it would be a good song with the right music. maybe along the lines of someone like FLAW or STAINED…that sorta style

I dont really get the lyric part of it, even though I dont think its written bad. I like the idea, and also the thought of putting music to it. But like I said, it doesn’t have that flow to it, more of that poetic vibe…. know what i’m saying? I hope so…. Good work still….

fun writing – maybe not a top hit but who knows, lots of lyrics are out there.

I would take the time to clean up the structure and use “you” instead of “u”