Poetry / The Mouse Was Soused

Mickey Mouse left this house
At four A.M this morning
Incoherent
Blasted on his own
Immortal brand name
We tried to sober him up
But reason had no stick
The
Mouse
Was
Soused

Waking early
I surfed the stations
Stopping only for the news
“Micky flips
Leaps
And Sidewalk hits.”

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