Lyrics / my song, no title really, lol

This world doesn’t seem right,
People can’t sleep at night,
No one has any morals or beliefs,
This whole worlds living in grief.

Everyone believes in conformaty,
No more people’s individuality,
There’s no more peace,
I don’t think these wars will cease.

Are you aware?
It’s just too much for me to bare,
Something in the world is wrong,
Nothing seems to last for long.

Racism’s holding people back,
You can see all the education people lack,
Is this how its going to be,
This just doesn’t make sense to me.

No one knows how to get along,
This all just seems crude and wrong,
Everyone’s enemies,
Making people act like it’s World War 3.

Are you aware?
It’s just too much for me to bare,
Something in the world is wrong,
Nothing seems to last for long.

People judging by what they see,
No more standing up for what you believe,
You become silent about things that matter,
All your dreams seem to crumble and shatter.

People breaking down under the pressure,
Others are miserable beyond measure,
No one even cares,
As long as the problems aren’t theirs.

Are you aware?
It’s just too much for me to bare,
Something in the world is wrong,
Nothing seems to last for long.

Are you aware?
Are you?

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April 06, 2009

throughxthexfire

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December 24, 2006

Iveloadedmygun

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Iveloadedmygun reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

i thought it was decent. i see where you are coming from and also same as what i was thinking around your age.There is a lot wrong in the world but there is a lot of good as well, just might have to take a deeper look to find it.

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October 27, 2006

barb

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barb reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Very insightful for someone so young! Your generation is our future. Work to change this world. possible title: ARE YOU AWARE, just a thought. very good job writing. Keep writing. You have a lot of talent!