Limericks / Mercutio's Curse

funny. good rhytm/meter. conplies with structure. no corrections. good job

Well, it was interesting I will give you that. As far as original, cant give you high marks. Almost all the lines are quotes directly from Shakespeare or Robbie Burns. I did like how you meshed the two, creative. But as far as being totally original and artistic, quoting other ppl just doent do it for me. LOL but maybe if you did this same idea with a more words changed so its not quite so obvious who you are copying.

Eve

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March 24, 2008

by calliopeiamuse

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Um… I don’t know who Robbie Burns is. I certainly didn’t TRY to copy him, though I’m sorry if that’s what I ended up doing. I was definitely quoting Shakepeare, though.

March 24, 2008

by calliopeiamuse

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Um… I don’t know who Robbie Burns is. I certainly didn’t TRY to copy him, though I’m sorry if that’s what I ended up doing. I was definitely quoting Shakepeare, though.

March 24, 2008

by Brynn

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Lol no worries, its a funny poem. Like a parody.

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Rhythm didn’t work and, aside from small pox, what pox are you talking about?  I’m lost!

Dear Writer,

This is brilliant and sounds effortless. I hope you submitted this to a teacher.

At 17 you have a very nice gift for turning a phrase.

Kudos!

R