Poetry / Twisted Rant

I have to say that a short poem like thin regards to madness is an awesome achievment in the effect that you have. I really enjoyed the way that you grab your readers’ eyes and minds with the words that you write in this poem because those words are what poetry such a wonderful idea. Madness has come reminds me of madness descending on the masses, hysteria prevalent.
Stealing the night is impossible and yet it seems as though you want us to believe in the metaphysical conception of madness “stealing” the night.
Rapturous lamen- I liked this line in its simple yet incredibly effective diction that complements the word lament very well.
Fill sanities void- you need a ’ here to denote ownership but otherwise this is a great phrase and a great thing to read. I loved this poem.
Perhaps it is hell sent? I like how you make this a question, but you also are encountering an issue then with the puntucation of the rest of the poem. If you want to include punctuation here it looks bad not to include it throughout the rest of the poem. perceptually you will want to fix this problem before it continues to be a problem. Remember, A, B, C, D, E, F, G, H, I , J, K, L, M, N, O, P, Q, R, S, T, U, V, W, X, Y, and Z. You either want punctuation to be present or not at all.
Or from lost dreams withing- i liked this line because it recognizes that we as humans have lost dreams within and we are always facing the trials of surviving to meet the dreams with reality. Ultimately I enjoyed reading this poem and I feel that you are a good author and I hope that you are successful in any venture you might take in the future.  

I see a brillant idea in the works but never quite forming.

Now I am anti-punctuation myself. So understand this. Why use the question marks when everything else has nothing? This is an inconsistancy. I used to do this a lot in college and my creative writing professor would bleed on the page and say ALL or NOTHING. That in my opinion takes away from the poem.

Madness = Chaos = Reality is the flow I get.

As a quick rewrite I suggest as follows:

Madness comes
Stealing into the night
Rapturous lament
That fill Sanities void
Perhaps it is hell sent
Or even lost from dreams within
These are thought’s chaotic rambling
Releasing the final grasps

Reality revealed
Now alone never more