Haiku/Senryu / Effects of Solitude
Hermitic, alone;
if he continues he will
escape but perish.
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poet_from_hell reviewed Version 1 -
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pretty good
reminds me of the Judas Priest song
Beyond the Realms of Death
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splitmam reviewed Version 1 -
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Actually, I think the title perfectly fits this haiku! The imagery is very clear and leaves me rather sad.
Nice work!
VioletL reviewed Version 1 -
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Hermitic and alone carry the same meaning as the word no longer refers specifically to a desert dweller, but rather a hermit. NOt bad, however. Read about senryu.
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