Poetry / Feathered Dreams

Feathered Dreams

Feathered dreams
Hopelessness and a diamond ring
Are reality and a dream that has come true
Autumn leaves
A garden planted, in the spring
Now dies, after we picked and choosed
The winter coming
The leaves have fell off the trees
Now the branches show through
Where feather dreams
You’re lying close to me
In a comforter, made by you
Where I plant the seeds
For a garden in the spring
A baby made from me and you
Fulfilling a need
Extending a name and a family’s destiny
In a world, where everything’s picked and choosed
A world, that knows no dream
As you plant your seeds
You don’t know if they’ll bear fruit
Through a diamond ring
I have found a feathered dream
While the seasons are full of abuse
You are my feather dream
Love in our hearts, mean everything
Our hearts, need to pick and choose
Until my life ends, like autumn to the plants and trees
You’ll live with me, in feathered dreams
My feathered dream
I love you

Cary

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