Poetry / Planting The Seeds Of Creativity

Out of the depth of senseless speech
A half formed thought, yet out of reach.
And a gleamings of the blurted thought
Like ashes smoldering are soon forgot.

So in comforting solitude
To reconstruct this baser mood.
To till the soil and plant it right,
A hardier seed that will not blight.

For many a seed sewn upon a rock
Will neither yeild a shoot or stalk.
And broadcast in haste
Yeilds no fruit
Just wasted words left destitute.

Well formed words our thoughts should be
Green and fresh as in a fernery
For one healthy plant is worth the toil
And will produce a fruit that will not spoil.

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