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You’re a sunrise,
for the first time,
every time.

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TheRavenOD avatar General Stranger

May 01, 2008

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Well I guess that kind of makes sense because every day is a different day, everyday the sun may rise its just a little different as it was before. Thanks for sharing this with me.

The Raven

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November 22, 2006

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Capturing the amazing moments anew each…jus like the birth of every new sunrise it never fails to amaze..so much said in so few words…ty for that

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November 03, 2006

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The way I told it to her was, “Yea, they’re glitzy; but you, you’re like the sun come up in the morning.” It’s nice to find someone that fills the bill.

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November 03, 2006

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I really like this. It’s beautiful. I may steal it and say it to my boyfriend.

The punctuation could be altered a little though. It may be more powerful if you present it this way: “You’re a sunrise for the first time. Every time.” I’d play with it a bit.

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November 02, 2006

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That is a damn sappy metaphor. Seriously, that’s some trite imagery.

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November 02, 2006

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This is so true of some people and some situations.

I used to work with people with dementia and that is the first thing that came to my mind when reading this.

I’ve got to remember this one. Thank-you for your positiveness.

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October 29, 2006

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MOre like poetry, but I get it. A new day a new first time. Very Clever

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October 29, 2006

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could make a good lyric

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October 29, 2006

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What a warm and heart felt quote. Wonderful.  10.

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October 28, 2006

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all that i can say to this is beautiful!

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