Haiku/Senryu / Her Taste
Her taste on my lips
My body won’t reject her
as my heart has done
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aw0445204 reviewed Version 1 -
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Powerfull and so true… I get the feeling of a man who is in lust and not in love…ah the story of my life..
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onlywish reviewed Version 1 -
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This is one of the most honest haiku I have read. You can’t take her back but you still enjoy the good sex. That was my take on it. Great senryu. Well written from a female or male point of view we all do it.
FrumpBurger reviewed Version 1 -
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I’ve so been that girl. Oh, pain. :(
Nice haiku, though. Clear, well-done.
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