Lyrics / This is Fake

Taking it down.
Bring it back to me.
Let this go.
Another word, and we’re both done.
Forgive it,
Forget it.
Let’s let this love die.
Die here tonight.
We both know it’s over.
So why let it ruin everything else.
We’ve got so much good in us.
Just not together.

This love is over.
Over-rated.
This love is fake.
Make-Believe.

We truely loved each other from the start.
But this story, won’t have a happy ending.

It’s like a Romantic Comedy.
Just not as happy.
But just as fake.

Just kill it.
Leave what we had.
Start a new book with somebody else.

We won’t fight through this anymore.
No more mind games.
No more misconceptions of what we really want.
It’s all over.
Dead.
Gone.

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December 22, 2006

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I was looking for a somethiung that held this all together. Its good , but its a good piece of prose , not really lyrics. You really need a repeater to set it as lyrics. I liked your word play however and this a rewrite would work wonders.

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